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You're not the type

to make heads turn in the streets
when you walk past, and you know it.
You dress like someone wanting to hide
in something just slightly too-wide.
With the underwear models and their
bedroom-gazes looking down on us
from their large-as-life posters,
you've got nothing in common,
(too much here and too little there),
your life doesn't get wrapped in plastic,
to be preserved as something perfect,
and your feet are strange and hairy,
but I don't care, honey, why would I?

I love you, I love you, je t'aime.
forget about sex appeal
The last line saves this from being one great insult, and it was kind of meant that way.

Let's be brutal.
Let's be real.
I fucking love you,
and I start to think I always will.

For someone special, of course :heart:

(Have taken care to avoid pronouns, because I like imagining that you could tell this to anyone in overly large clothes and strange feet.)
28 deviations
I fell in love with words
long before I kissed a boy
or girl -
I watched the world
through virtual glasses,
zooming in on syllables
wherever I went,
lapping up knowledge
with the fresh first
only children have.

The first time I wrote my name
I wasn't satisfied with it,
and had to writewritewrite
to make that first bout
of crooked scribbles
alright -

a whole world
had opened itself to me
with pencil on paper.

It's true;
the first poem
I ever wrote
was my name.
first love
For UnsungWritersGuild 's weekly challenge #4:

Prompt: "Write about your writing roots. How and when did you start? BE CREATIVE!"
118 deviations
I try
to keep my heart closer
to my chest these days -

it's not working very well.

That's what I say!
Hearts belong in a chest!

But instead,
my heart beats
like the wings of a summerbird,
too-quick, too-strong, and it simply
jumps out of my chest to collect
another dent on the street.

My heart --

it doesn't suit me anymore.

(It hurts, clearly it's now
out-of-date, ancient system,
I need a complete reboot.)

The silly organ
keeps wanting to run after
old stories, and I'm too scared
to follow, so you see -

we've grown apart,
my heart and I.

Could I please
have a new one?
Wanted: Heart Transplant
I don’t know if I use my head the right way,
but then again who’s to say that I’m wrong?
I’m sick of this longing but I feel too dull when it’s gone.


unusually normal
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So, hi. I'm a girl. I like using fancy words. And Oscar Wilde.

Rule no. 1: Give a llama - get a llama! :iconllamacopterplz:
Because llamas are awesome.

my wonderful cheshire-icon was made by Herzlose

I appreciate all favs and comments, even though I do not always thank for them. So instead, have a collective thank you here:

:party: :iconthanksplz:

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cookiebearkitten Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the llama~ :iconrubcheeksplz:
miserabel Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :D
xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the fave :rose:
miserabel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Or: thank you for sharing your fabulous writing! :ahoy:
Gata-Art Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the llama! Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1]  Have a llama back! Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 
xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you again for the critique :heart: :hug:
miserabel Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: psh it was but one critique, you don't need to thank me more than once~
xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Also thank you so much for the watch too Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
miserabel Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :blowkiss:
xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
haha but it was such a nice surprise I had to say thank you at least once! :hug:
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